Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Questions/Concerns for Rhetorical Analysis

A concern of mine pertainng to my first draft of my essay is that it might not flow as well as I wanted it to, and that my points are kind of disconnected. I had a bit of a hard time sorting out my ideas and organizing them.  For example, what could I flesh out more? And do my points all pertain well to my thesis?

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  1. I had similar concerns with my paper. I was not sure on which order to place my ideas so they would have the best effect and have flow. By talking to my peer editor, she helped me figure out the best way to organize the paper.

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